Ghazal
Khud ko zakhmatey rahey,
Hausley aazmatey rahey.
Tha falak duur magar,
Hum haath baRhatey rahey.
Uthaati rahee qadam zindagi,
Hum nigahen bichatey rahey.
Saans aati rahee, jaatee rehee,
Woh aatey rahey, jaatey rahey.
Hum bhulatey rahe unhen,
Aur woh yaad aatey rahey.
Dil se du’aa nikalti rahee,
Yawar haath uthaatey rahey.
Wah! Wah, wah, aur wah!
After such an update, Bhaijan, you can safely get your name crossed out of the list of kaamchors. Coming up with such eloquence is not an easy job.
Two thumbs up!
Saadat
December 29, 2008 at 7:26 pm
Good stuff!
Btw, thanks for visiting my blog.
Zeenat
December 29, 2008 at 8:35 pm
Also, it would be really nice if you would add me to your blog roll.
Thanks!
Zeenat
December 29, 2008 at 8:36 pm
Chotey bhai, aap ne pasand kiya, mehnat thikaney lagee. Though the kaamchor label sticks until the frequency of updates becomes decent.
Zeenat: Thank you for stopping by. Your blog has been linked here for sometime
knicq
December 29, 2008 at 11:13 pm
Fantastic stuff! Well written.
Specs
December 30, 2008 at 6:05 pm
Specs: Welcome to this rarely updated blog. And thank you for the kind words – they are as much encouragement as one can hope for.
knicq
December 31, 2008 at 1:38 am
aahay…zakhmi…
UTP
January 1, 2009 at 2:01 am
*ahem*
)
Kya baat hai aap kee
Mahwish
January 5, 2009 at 9:48 am
UTP: Kaun nahin hai?
Mahwish: Pata nahin. Aapko pata chaley to mujhey bhi bata dena.
knicq
January 6, 2009 at 3:19 am