Knicq

A little brooding here, a bit of pondering there, helpings of humour, sprinklings of tears, now celebrating, now lamenting; all done under the watchful eyes of Hope, all endured in the hope of staying human.

Ghazal

with 9 comments

Khud ko zakhmatey rahey,

Hausley aazmatey rahey.

Tha falak duur magar,

Hum haath baRhatey rahey.

Uthaati rahee qadam zindagi,

Hum nigahen bichatey rahey.

Saans aati rahee, jaatee rehee,

Woh aatey rahey, jaatey rahey.

Hum bhulatey rahe unhen,

Aur woh yaad aatey rahey.

Dil se du’aa nikalti rahee,

Yawar haath uthaatey rahey.

Written by knicq

December 29, 2008 at 2:31 am

Posted in Yawariyat

9 Responses

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  1. Wah! Wah, wah, aur wah!

    After such an update, Bhaijan, you can safely get your name crossed out of the list of kaamchors. Coming up with such eloquence is not an easy job.

    Two thumbs up!

    Saadat

    December 29, 2008 at 7:26 pm

  2. Good stuff!

    Btw, thanks for visiting my blog.

    Zeenat

    December 29, 2008 at 8:35 pm

  3. Also, it would be really nice if you would add me to your blog roll.

    Thanks!

    Zeenat

    December 29, 2008 at 8:36 pm

  4. Chotey bhai, aap ne pasand kiya, mehnat thikaney lagee. Though the kaamchor label sticks until the frequency of updates becomes decent.

    Zeenat: Thank you for stopping by. Your blog has been linked here for sometime :)

    knicq

    December 29, 2008 at 11:13 pm

  5. Tha falak duur magar,

    Hum haath baRhatey rahey.

    Uthaati rahee qadam zindagi,

    Hum nigahen bichatey rahey.

    Fantastic stuff! Well written.

    Specs

    December 30, 2008 at 6:05 pm

  6. Specs: Welcome to this rarely updated blog. And thank you for the kind words – they are as much encouragement as one can hope for. :)

    knicq

    December 31, 2008 at 1:38 am

  7. aahay…zakhmi…

    UTP

    January 1, 2009 at 2:01 am

  8. *ahem*
    Kya baat hai aap kee :o )

    Mahwish

    January 5, 2009 at 9:48 am

  9. UTP: Kaun nahin hai? :)

    Mahwish: Pata nahin. Aapko pata chaley to mujhey bhi bata dena.

    knicq

    January 6, 2009 at 3:19 am


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